Progress Critique

At first I was going to do my final project on bubbles but that idea was a bust. I decided to start over and do a self portrait series. In the pictures below I am portraying different phases in my life. I do not have a lot of pictures yet but these will be the past representations. I am going to re-shoot the pictures that came out too dark. I would appreciate some constructive criticism.

I wanted to poke fun at the horrible faces I used to have when I played basketball.

Flamenco Dancer Phase

Thankfully this phase did not last long.